A/N: Another short poem, but I am however working on a longer piece (cirka 15 pages), if anyone prefers my short stories.
Time
Time to study.
Time to stress.
Time to work.
To get success.
Time to worry.
Time to drink.
Time to forget.
No time to think.
Time to regret.
Time to doubt.
Now time for love.
But time ran out.
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Hi everyone!
I'm a young girl on twenty-one, who is currently taking the bachelor Popular Fiction at the South Gate Society School of Creative Writing.
Here I'll study every kind of writing, which means this website will be about anything from short stories to poems. I will write everything from my preferred subject - fantasy - to experimental texts, where I'll try to grow as an author.
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Time to comment! I liked how you built the lines
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Thank you 😊
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You are welcome!
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You nailed it!
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Thank you! 😄
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Precisely, Maria! 🙂
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Oh so true. I like this, it makes you think. What should our priorities be I wonder?
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So easy to lose life to inconsequential things…
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Concisely encompasses what people of the modern era face. We have to put in time into all the other stuff – work, study, gaining success, dealing with hardships through some relaxant or pleasure-source (drinking, eating, etc) – but in turn, we avoid thinking and loving, which we could probably use a lot more of. But then again, when it comes to thinking, it depends. Thinking may make us realise how bad our situation is and so numbing that ability may be necessary to go on without crashing. But love, that’s become secondary now. And sometimes we end up pushing those who love us the most away in the bargain.
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If we watch the clock, we miss out on much in life; if we don’t pay attention to the clock, it slips by before we know it. I guess the lesson is to balance our time. Nicely done!
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Thank you! 😆
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You are welcome!
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Heartbreaking and real.
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Time to hug you for a great poem 😊😊😊
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Thanks! :D:D:D
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Beautiful piece. Thumbs up.
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Thank you! 😊
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The flow is very nice and works in a hypnotic rhythm. I’d say its all in time.
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Thank you 😆
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That is nice.
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Thank you 🙂
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You’re welcome.
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