A/N: Wednesday poem by Sarah Doughty. In my mind, it’s the story of a tough break-up. What do you guys think? 🙂
I was born in limbo,
a purgatory of
your making,
but over time,
I’ve transformed
it into paradise.
© Sarah Doughty
Source: Transformed
Transformed
Published by mariasjostrand
Hi everyone! I'm a young girl on twenty-one, who is currently taking the bachelor Popular Fiction at the South Gate Society School of Creative Writing. Here I'll study every kind of writing, which means this website will be about anything from short stories to poems. I will write everything from my preferred subject - fantasy - to experimental texts, where I'll try to grow as an author. Enjoy! View all posts by mariasjostrand
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Work of merit may be interpreted in many ways, as Neruda said “Better than any explanation is the experience of feelings that poetry can reveal to a nature open enough to understand it” – it’s the feelings that the work evokes, which resonate from our own experiences and can be interpreted in many different ways, according to those experiences – I think it could be break up, family or many other things. but more important than the why, for me, is the sense of sadness and empowerment that flow from it.
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Yes, definitely. I tend to leave things open so people can fill in the blanks on the situation, but I’m often areful about word choices. Either I insert the feeling, or I let the words gently guide people there. Sometimes it doesn’t happen, but I enjoy hearing about how pieces are interpreted. 😊
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Yes, what writers all hope for – prompt a reaction that gets people feeling / thinking ^^
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Yes! By keeping things short, not everyone realizes they’ll be pulled in so deep, at least that’s what I’ve heard from some. 😊
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^^ Ah well, back to the grind, another two to write today – Anthology in the works!
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Ooh, congratulations!
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Thank you so much for sharing this! I appreciate it! 😊
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You’re very welcome 🙂 I love your poetry
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I’m honored that you do.
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How few words can make an enormous impact is just splendid. You manage to perfect it across all levels.
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Thank you 🙂
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You should check out some of her other poetry as well 😁
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Sure :). You should do the same with mine.
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